Oct
18
Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photo Contest: Creative Cars

Congratulations Kyricom πŸ†

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Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photo Contest: Creative Cars

Congratulations Olga. This was my favorite. πŸ†

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Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

Congratulations Retired. πŸ†

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Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

Congratulations Velya πŸ†

Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

Congratulations Zizounai. πŸ†

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Oct
14
Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photo Contest: Creative Cars

Looks like a very well loved and well used rusty kids pedal car which has spent some time in a sandpit. I am sure it could tell many delightful stories.

Oct
13
Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

This looks like a scary horror genre. It looks like a teaser about a broken killer doll.
It reminds me of Chucky. Graphics and text are well done.

Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

Its much better now. πŸ‘

Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

Thank you for that. I learned something new. πŸ‘©πŸΌβ€πŸŽ“β˜ΊοΈ

Oct
12
Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

Another member has been encouraging me and some others to comment on entries so I am merely obliging her. Some members enjoy the interaction and like to know what viewers think about their art regardless of whether the reaction seems good or bad or indifferent. We can always learn something from viewers comments, even if it's only about different points of view and different tastes so I would like to encourage you and other viewers to comment as well and let people know what you like or don't like about their work. Maybe you can give helpful tips for improvement to a few? That way we can all learn from each other and hopefully improve our work.

Oct
11
Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

A love story about someone waiting for three hours for a call and getting shot for three hours? How does anyone shoot another person for three hours and why? I think it only takes one bullet to kill someone with a real bullet and that doesn't take 3 hours. It makes me wonder if his movements and reactions was being secretly shot with a hidden camera which would explain the deceit? It's an excellent play on words which leaves the reader wondering. Your movie title is well done. The white outline makes it easily readable. The sentence under it is also easy to read but the credits at the bottom need a brighter font which contrasts with the dark background. Dark on dark is very hard to read.

Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

A movie about a man who can walk through walls into photos or paintings seems like it is in a fantasy adventure genre. It makes me wonder what adventures he will find along that road and whether he will just walk through the one painting or does he go through more of them? You have a good clear title and the name of the main characters but you have not included other credits which are generally found on a movie poster.
https://zevendesign.com/5-steps-creating-movie-poster/

Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

I think a movie about the frustrations of a photo manipulator would appeal to a very restricted audience. It does not give a clear story line so if he is just sitting at a computer and doing photo manipulations, it would seem more like watching a tutorial than a movie.
You did a good job of adding all the 3D elements from pixelsquid and I see you have added credits to the poster but I think lightening up the text at the bottom would make it easier to read.

Skyangel commented on πŸ† Photoshop Contest: Screenwriter for a day

This looks like an obvious love story. The tag line makes me wonder what their dream and requests might be. You did a great job of very clear and easily readable text and included all the credits. Well done.

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