Your composition is very good looking. I think there are some little things to look after though. You have left cutting traces L of the plane. There is a stain L of the fence. The boat makes a shadow but no reflection and you forgot the armchair reflection. The cabin looks a bit blurred compared to the rest (large tree, staircase, fence... ) which is very sharp. Sorry to tell you all that because I do love the composition, but you still have time to make it better. Ahem... and maybe the American flag is not necessary but then this is only me π
I've fixed the issues that you pointed out. Also added smoke coming from chimney. You obviously spent time going over my image in great detail. Just curious why you did this on this image and none of the others? Frankly, it made me feel a little picked upon. (I got over it). The American flag stays. Sorry if it offends you.
Thank you Author, you make me feel very proud. Just a little thing: about the canoe's reflection, you shouldn't see the seats... Sorry sorry sorry, I didn't want to annoy you, I just picked your chop because I liked it, thought it could be a winner. Watching it bigger I noticed several things that could have been better. I didn't send messages to the other entries because I am lazy... there would be things to say about some of them though... I am not only lazy but also shy and I had to gather all my courage to write what I wrote π
I don't think Zizounai is picking on you, more the opposite.
She's trying to help an image she likes to get better by offering valid input. Don't be offended by it but learn from it.
Most artists are extremely sensitive but Luna Iβve found this lovely group to have the best intentions unlike many others over the years.
If I had a dollar for every time Iβve meticulously scanned my own work only to miss something. I donβt think Iβm too bad a chopper and I have my late father to thank because he always pointed out what was wrong with my work as a hobby artist himself. It was emotionally hard to take as a developing teenager.
But now when I win a trophy I look up at his photo and thank him for pushing me.
There is no doubt you are a seasoned top digital artist but we can still learn surely.
I didnβt mean to call you Shirley π
Congrats, being the eternal pessimist, I always think that by finding many faults in a chop is trying to influence another person into thinking a chop is not that good and should get a lower score, so most of the time I do not comment. No chop is perfect and there's always something that could improve it.
huh... OMG... All these past years I thought you were... π³female!!! hahahaha Then again... I AM female and my avatar looks kinda male... what the heck, I learned that today everyone can freely choose his or her own gender. Love your entry and I am glad to see you here π
Wait...Let me check to make sure...
Yep. I'm male. (Always have been). I realize that "Luna" sounds more like a woman's name than a man's. So, your confusion is understandable. "Lunacy" however is pretty well distributed among males and females. Thanks for your comment---and also glad to see you!
huh... OMG... All these past years I thought you were... π³female!!! hahahaha Then again... I AM female and my avatar looks kinda male... what the heck, I learned that today everyone can freely choose his or her own gender. Love your entry and I am glad to see you here π
Dwarves and Giants created by Velya
https://www.pexels.com/photo/green-and-yellow-trees-5818298/
Eibsee in Bavaria. The mystery Oil Painting of the little island recovered. created by RufKut
It is one of the rarest oil paintings to date that was finally recovered from a 15 year long search.
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Good luck! π